One True Love (A Haiku)

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Photo By: Sonyo Estavillo

Your smile is the sun

Your joy is the sky and earth

You’re my one true love


 

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23 thoughts on “One True Love (A Haiku)

    realryangray said:
    March 2, 2017 at 10:37 AM

    She’s the best.

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      Sonyo Estavillo responded:
      March 2, 2017 at 10:40 AM

      She is amazing. Kids do change your life and she’s changed ours for the better. πŸ™‚

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    stacilys said:
    March 2, 2017 at 11:04 AM

    Awww, what a cutie. Is she your daughter?
    πŸ™‚

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      Sonyo Estavillo responded:
      March 2, 2017 at 11:07 AM

      Yep, she is my little one and only. She’s amazing. She’s so happy and positive and laughing all the time. It’s like God knew what I needed in my life. πŸ™‚

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        stacilys said:
        March 2, 2017 at 11:12 AM

        Awwww, that’s great. So nice to know.
        Have a lovely day.
        πŸ™‚

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        Sonyo Estavillo responded:
        March 2, 2017 at 11:25 AM

        Thank you and it was great meeting you too. I love your site by the way and am now following πŸ™‚

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        stacilys said:
        March 7, 2017 at 10:04 AM

        Ohhhh, you’re more than welcome. I’m now following you too.
        πŸ™‚ ❀

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    YellowCable said:
    March 2, 2017 at 3:29 PM

    So cute!

    Liked by 1 person

    Tanushree said:
    March 2, 2017 at 6:13 PM

    Gorgeous ❀❀

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      Sonyo Estavillo responded:
      March 2, 2017 at 8:07 PM

      Awe…thanks! We got this fancy dress for Christmas from my sister and I had no idea when to put it on her. Soooo….Valentine’s Day came around and my daughter and I did a little photo shoot! πŸ™‚

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    thereluctantpoetweb said:
    March 2, 2017 at 8:32 PM

    This was so wonderful!! Especially loved to hear the audio of you (I’m assuming) reciting it!!! This is the first time I have seen someone embed a recording of a recitation – with music no less!! Bravo!!! Very inventive!

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      Sonyo Estavillo responded:
      March 2, 2017 at 9:45 PM

      Oh, thank you so much for listening! I’ve been in the media realm for a while, I have my BA & MA in entertainment (media & film) so I think it helps a little. I try to stay creative, I can’t help it actually. πŸ™‚

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    chrisr74 said:
    March 2, 2017 at 10:02 PM

    You are a creative soul & as a creative spirit myself, it’s great to read your stuff and listen to it! πŸ™‚

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    jennylynnangelo said:
    March 2, 2017 at 10:06 PM

    Love this, it’s so simple and so sweet. Your daughter is BEAUTIFUL!!!! I mean it!!! πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

    Dan said:
    March 4, 2017 at 12:30 PM

    Nothing like haiku to define essence.

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      Sonyo Estavillo responded:
      March 4, 2017 at 12:45 PM

      Thank you Dan, sometimes the fewer the words the better. Short and to the point. πŸ™‚

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    Maggie said:
    March 11, 2017 at 10:19 AM

    What a sweetie!! ❀ And that dress is so cute.

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    OKRickety said:
    March 19, 2017 at 4:47 PM

    I hope you, as a writer, appreciate this correction. “Your” and “you’re” are often confused because they sound the same. The difference is that “your” is a possessive, and “you’re” is a contraction for “you are”.

    As a result, I’m not completely certain but I believe you meant your haiku to be:

    Your smile is the sun
    Your joy is the sky and earth
    You’re my one true love

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      Sonyo Estavillo responded:
      March 19, 2017 at 9:11 PM

      Oops…terrible mistake. I think I was looking at the last line and made the other lines match without looking closer. I fixed it now. πŸ™‚ Thanks for catching it! I looked it over dozens of times and didn’t catch it. Silly error. πŸ™‚

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